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Surely nothing is better than a trampoline.

Bouncing higher and higher
Propelling yourself skyward with every bound
Feeling the air rush and whip around you as you gain momentum

But best of all,
Harnessing that incredible freedom
Like some fantastic bird riding the wind
And having the entire world at your fingertips.

But in the heat of the moment, at your maximum height
Somehow you lose balance.
And as you stumble, you stub your toe
And you fall, robbed of the experience,
  your fingers nipped in the harsh metal springs
  your knees rubbed and burned across the surface
  your body twisted in pain from static electricity
  your dignity well and truly shattered.

And as you jump to safety, you trip.
You crash to the ground in a mangled heap,
The hot sun glaring down at you as you futilely try to get up.

And when you finally limp your way back inside
covered in dirt and aching all over,
you know it was all worth it.
©2005-2009 ~Chrylibis
:iconchrylibis:

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A bit more simple this time.

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:iconsacliliad:
Ha ha ha! :D This is a great little poem you've conjured up here! Any inspiration for it?

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:iconchrylibis:
Well, I've always held this stance on trampolines.

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you're one in a crowd and you're paranoid of every sound.
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My only question is how you stub your toe at your greatest height on a trampoline.
Written well. Great moral. Limping away hurt and yet knowing it was worht it. Woohoo! May many moments of such enjoyment come this summer:heart:

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we are all in the gutter, only some of us are looking at the stars
. oscar wilde
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:iconchrylibis:
Thank you, and same to you :D
I was thinking you'd stub your toe by landing on it from a great height.

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you're one in a crowd and you're paranoid of every sound.
:iconbeckna-chan:
wow! that is so cool, because it fools you into a false sercurity thingy and then when this person trips he feels pain but thourght it was worth it, if you know what im saying, cus i sure dont. believe me i like it!

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I thought I was a trowel. Then I felt I was going up the garden path, and now I feel I'm in the door.

I'm not like pint of milk or hoover but I'm like

hatstand now.

~the late great Eddie Izzard
:iconsacliliad:
Haha I see... ;)

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Welcome to The ReVoLution.
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:iconchrylibis:
hehe thanks heaps :D yeah that's what i was going for

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you're one in a crowd and you're paranoid of every sound.
:iconbeckna-chan:
it was very good then! :bounce: i do love trampolines!

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I thought I was a trowel. Then I felt I was going up the garden path, and now I feel I'm in the door.

I'm not like pint of milk or hoover but I'm like

hatstand now.

~the late great Eddie Izzard
:iconchrylibis:
hehe, my feelings concerning trampolines are mixed. i've suffered all manner of trampoline-related injuries in my time, but they're good fun, hey

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you're one in a crowd and you're paranoid of every sound.

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